This is the animatic of our thriller opening, in which we have demonstrated what each of our shots shall consist of, and also a rough time of how long each shot would be.
2 problems here that you need to resolve if you wish to avoid losing marks - the total time is too short, indicating that either you don't have enough material for 2 mins, or you haven't timed the shots accurately. Both of these are essential to proper storyboarding, so not doing it will undermine your mark. Secondly, you STILL have not posted a version with a commentary as far as I can see. If it's somewhere else, it should be here, and you need to move it. Without the commentary the animatic above is not adequate as there aren't cuts, and drawings don't give sufficient information about planning. You need to add these asap to avoid losing more marks (you have already lost some for time management).
2 problems here that you need to resolve if you wish to avoid losing marks - the total time is too short, indicating that either you don't have enough material for 2 mins, or you haven't timed the shots accurately. Both of these are essential to proper storyboarding, so not doing it will undermine your mark. Secondly, you STILL have not posted a version with a commentary as far as I can see. If it's somewhere else, it should be here, and you need to move it. Without the commentary the animatic above is not adequate as there aren't cuts, and drawings don't give sufficient information about planning. You need to add these asap to avoid losing more marks (you have already lost some for time management).
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