This is a vlog describing the use and purpose of the costumes and props used within our thriller opening, and describing how they add to the feel of the film.
We did a video individually for Toby because he was ill on the day it was filmed. Therefore another was filmed just for Toby explaining the choice of clothing.
This is good blog material - it's a shame that Toby doesn't take part. Where was he? Toby - I suggest that you create your own version of this as protagonist so that you have a similar profile on the blog for assessment purposes. This can be done so easily at home (use a webcam or phone etc etc) as well as at college. To improve these, do a bit more work on them - why not insert screen grabs of you wearing the costumes? Or you could add images that are annotated in a post below/above? Always think about what more you could do.
Now you really should have lots of material on the editing process and titling. You are progressing quite fast, so don't lose this advantage that others may not have time for. You need to get screen grabs of transition work, any effects, garageband work (that you're doing now but there is nothing here about it). Lots of illustration and lots of explanation. Make sure that you're all represented here by using the heading for the post to show your name/s. Do more work on the titles - show research (essential for each of you), show decisions about name, font, design, insertion in sequence, etc etc. Remember that you are EACH expected to do at least 3 hours work on the production EACH WEEK, and most of that work should be on the blog. It should look like you have each spent this time, and assessment grades you on this effort too. So - more EFFORT on the blog still - it's currently around a low 3 (C) overall, and you need to do more to avoid it pulling down your overall mark.
This is good blog material - it's a shame that Toby doesn't take part. Where was he? Toby - I suggest that you create your own version of this as protagonist so that you have a similar profile on the blog for assessment purposes. This can be done so easily at home (use a webcam or phone etc etc) as well as at college. To improve these, do a bit more work on them - why not insert screen grabs of you wearing the costumes? Or you could add images that are annotated in a post below/above? Always think about what more you could do.
ReplyDeleteNow you really should have lots of material on the editing process and titling. You are progressing quite fast, so don't lose this advantage that others may not have time for. You need to get screen grabs of transition work, any effects, garageband work (that you're doing now but there is nothing here about it). Lots of illustration and lots of explanation. Make sure that you're all represented here by using the heading for the post to show your name/s. Do more work on the titles - show research (essential for each of you), show decisions about name, font, design, insertion in sequence, etc etc. Remember that you are EACH expected to do at least 3 hours work on the production EACH WEEK, and most of that work should be on the blog. It should look like you have each spent this time, and assessment grades you on this effort too. So - more EFFORT on the blog still - it's currently around a low 3 (C) overall, and you need to do more to avoid it pulling down your overall mark.
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