Well done, you have successfully executed all three editing techniques. You have some clever MOA s on the table with the case, the 180 rule is well observed, and you achieve the S RS technique. You do sort of break the 180 rule in one place when same nods - due to the position of the door in relation to Dan, it should be Toby who nods immediately afterwards. However, for the purpose of this exercise, we can let that go. Your script is imaginative and original. For the future, it is your camerawork that can be most improved. Some of your composition re S / RS results in too much of the frame being filled by irrelevant and unimportant mise en scene. Be far more mindful of this in the thriller work. It is a real challenge to avoid this when framing shots and usually requires you to go in closer. The shot of Dan at the table would be improved with more editing and variety of shots - again this will improve with experience. Well done. Next time, please meet the deadline re uploading to blog. Enjoy moving onto the thriller work and continue to use your creativity.
Well done, you have successfully executed all three editing techniques. You have some clever MOA s on the table with the case, the 180 rule is well observed, and you achieve the S RS technique. You do sort of break the 180 rule in one place when same nods - due to the position of the door in relation to Dan, it should be Toby who nods immediately afterwards. However, for the purpose of this exercise, we can let that go. Your script is imaginative and original. For the future, it is your camerawork that can be most improved. Some of your composition re S / RS results in too much of the frame being filled by irrelevant and unimportant mise en scene. Be far more mindful of this in the thriller work. It is a real challenge to avoid this when framing shots and usually requires you to go in closer. The shot of Dan at the table would be improved with more editing and variety of shots - again this will improve with experience. Well done. Next time, please meet the deadline re uploading to blog. Enjoy moving onto the thriller work and continue to use your creativity.
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